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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Total shock here. I felt the writing go strait to my hear.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Try working on those contractions. They should always have an apostrophe. Also, "after all" is two words. Otherwise, a great story!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very interesting. I like the description. What is the girl's name? Where do all the characters fit together? Who is this Dancer that observes them? I think you do have a story behind this idea.
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