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Review by Ben Fisher
Rated: E | (1.0)
This is not a short story and the grammar is all wrong.
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Review of Zeppelin of War  
Review by Ben Fisher
Rated: E | (1.0)
This is a sentence long. This is not a short story.

As far as grammar is concerned, the first letter of the second sentence should be capitalized.
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