Hello! Wow! That was a really interesting story! I hope that you will continue it! I want to see how Donna deals with telling herdaughters about their father! Good luck and continue sharing your stories with the WdC community! Write On!
Hello! Firstly, the way you describe the house was really good! I could almost imagine it in my head! I hope you keep up the good work and continue to express yourself! Good luck and continue sharing your stories with the WdC community! Write On!
Hello! This is a really touching and heartfelt story! This is a really unique plot! I will be awaiting your next stories, I guess. Continue expressing yourself! Good luck and continue sharing your stories with the WdC community! Write On!
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Wow! That was a really interesting story! I hope that you will continue it! I want to see how Donna deals with telling herdaughters about their father! 
Write On! 
This is a really unique plot! I will be awaiting your next stories, I guess. 
Continue expressing yourself! Good luck and continue sharing your stories with the WdC community!