Awe this poem brings back so many memories. I like it and think it flows well, I can relate to it, the girl that will never be forgotten and the feelings she still inspires inside of me.
Grammar and structure is my weak point so I can not comment on that but can say I did enjoy this and wish I could write something like this.
I really enjoyed reading this, it kept me wondering at the beginning on where or how Karen would end up, and I'm glad to see she had a good life. I think it's amazing how something little can change out lives for the better.
Great job :)
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