What lovely writing Jess, very well put indeed. What you are writing about is a 'hot and cold peroson'. It is a difficult situation to be in, i suggest you youtube 'Corey wayne' he has fantastic advice for those situations.
Great work
Hello, that was great, I really enjoyed your words and especially the last line, a very nice ending. The only line that didn't sing 'for me' was (or whole apples).
Hello, that is a beautiful poem, well done, I enjoyed reading it and the emotion you captured, i wasn't fond of the word 'recovering' i would have prefered a more gentle poetical word, but of course that is just my opinion. Well done.
Hello, an interesting article. I was slightly confused the in the first paragraph, you mention Crosby said 'to the effect of' but then you used quote brackets, so I was unsure if these were his actual words or not.
Well done.
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