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Review of A Century  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I kinda feel bad for the guy. His family are all too busy to take the time to celebrate a momentous occasion with him. This is a good example of how things are changing nowadays. People now (in some parts of the world) have simply filled their lives with too much business to be concerned with the elderly.

Nicely written, mate. I like that you kept the language nice and simple. It does its job and makes the reader feel empathy for the subject of the piece.
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