Very interesting piece of work. I felt that the way it started that it was a riddle but is awesome . Watch your spelling thats the only thing i tell you my friend! Evere=ything else was great!!
Great job
KEEP ON KEEPING ON!
Patrick
Great story!!! I really liked the way you described your surroundings. The action in the story was good too!!! SO keep on keeping on!! AND GOOD WORK!!! Sorry for the brief review i just wanted to write something but im in kind of a rush
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