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Review of Etched in time  Open in new Window.
Review by Celeste Gabriel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
My only critique was that I wished it was longer.

I really liked it though.
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Review of The Good Heart  Open in new Window.
Review by Celeste Gabriel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First of all, and this is coming from a person whose parent was a serial womanizer, this really touched me. For a story of under 3000 words, you have managed to portray this in such a realistic way....just wow!

I honestly cannot find anything wrong with this story - grammatically or otherwise. I suppose my emotion is clouding my better judgement, but that just goes to show how excellent this piece was.


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