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Review of Apple  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I like the way you present the apple as something so completely desirable. Its flavor, texture, experience branded forever on her memory. I think you use strong words to convey the feeling of shame after the fruit was sampled, like barren, demise, naked. It is almost as if a part of her does not regret eating the fruit.
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Review of The Blue Fairy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed your fairytale. It is simple and flows with the classic elements, but has a slightly new perspective. Your story is consice and well rounded.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
An interesting memory. I like that you included the recipe, it makes your naustalgia accessible to the reader.
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