Failure, hmmm well I can tell you now this was no failure! Like the connection to reality (your kitchen roof falling down lol) and also the use of archaic language "thou" this is almost a biblical reference which gives the poem an overall more grand effect. Great poem! well thats my opinion.
Ben :P
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