aha, that's exactly the thing you don't need and shouldn't acquire the thing you feel you need to want...since it got you in that state of mind....lol....The idea of the poem is great...but I'm afraid you didn't get it across well. Rather, it is confusing and does not press deep enough into the matter to make the reader care.
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