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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is truly wonderful - I love how you touched upon the cycle of inflicting pain upon others, and that those who don't deal with their pain in a healthy way often end up inflicting it because it never left them in the first place. My favorite lines would probably be "Away into the Darkness Sea Where children can't exist" and "Those ghastly secrets of the toy That he's been made to be" Primarily because it really gets your message across. :)
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