I had no interest in this essay what so ever. i see that its some philoshophy whatever thing but it still didnt speak to me. although dont just take it from me, because im no expert, but maybe this just isnt ur thing. i do like the whole concept thing ur going for though. good luck in the future.
Well, this poem could use some major work. I see that u tryed to make it something that would show us the good things in the world, but it didn't really show that. i found it really boring! Yous also dont seem to have any pattern for the structure of it, its just kinda there. good luck next time.
This poem really spoke out to me! It describes the hardshipes of marriage and what came happen because of it sometimes.The one thing that bothered me was that u started out with one type of poem and then kinda switched into another, i really thought it should have stayed consitent. All and all it was a good poem and i hope you continue to write more!
This poem speaks out to all girls who like someone who doesn't like them back. It's written like its from experience and that makes it that more real. I don't know how the tune goes but it looked like u were trying to ryme a little but not all the time, and i think that if u start to ryme you should do it all in rhyms. Good luck, and keep on writing!
This is one touching poem! I mean the way you relate things to our own lives its just gives every thing a new perspective. I mean we do have to power to help those third world countries so why don't we? This has got to be one of the most powerful things I've ever read! I hope to see more!
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