Wow, I was incredibly impressed with this work! Even with how you formatted it so pleasingly. I felt the hook at the beginning was very effective and reeled me in, so I was captivated the entire time. You even had really interesting character development. Nicely done!
I honestly did not expect to enjoy this piece as much as I did after I had finished it. It was a biography, but at the same time, a lot more. I learned a lot more about Audrey Hepburn than I'd ever known before. It seemed very personal, the way you emotionally connected with Audrey and let that show through your work. Thanks for sharing this!
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