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Review of Trick or Tweet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As I was going through the story, I can't help but feel like I have read it before... It feels so familiar. ANYWAY, back to what we want to hear. In this story, I found so much of it interesting. This is like an extreme view of technologies effect on us. To be honest, I can't even say it is that extreme. I really wouldn't be surprised if something like this happened in the future, maybe even the near future. Well, to answer your question, of course it will go to far. We are humans, we take everything we can too far. I wish you all luck surviving in this land of technology, and keep on writing~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hmm... im not sure if all the categories listed for this peice are accurate, but this is deffinantly the start of a great story. A few minor spelling errors, i think you should keep working on it and make it into something real.
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