Grace! I loved your story! You captured my attention and kept me intrigued! I kept wondering where the plot would take me! I sense a love story unfolding with the mysterious gentleman who asked you to help him select a sofa. I kept wondering if the familiarity had to do something with a past life, a possible soul-mate? Then Henry's illness, there were many magnetic pulls, drawing me in wonder with regards to what could unfold! Your story reminded me of the times when I was younger and my mom and aunt would get together to watch a soap opera. I wanted to spend time with my mom and aunt so I too would watch and I remember the frustration I would feel at the end of the hour because the drama always seem to end in a way that would leave you intensely wondering what was going to happen next. The nice thing was that I had something to look forward to! So, I want to know where the story is headed! What happens with the mysterious gentleman? With Henry? Thank you for sharing your story, for sharing is indeed caring.
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