As I read this, I took it as being very personal. Almost like a too do list for letting go or a pep talk to yourself.
I did not check for grammar or spelling errors as this was not a poem (to me). I hope that writing down your feelings helped you and will help others learn to let go when they need to as well:)
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Again, happy anniversay!!!!
I loved the imagry, the words you spoke so well of being alone.
I had only a couple of comments and please remember these are only my thoughts and I am not a professional editor.
third stanza..
I have finally come to understand,
This is what it is,
To lose
are you conveying what it feels like??
again, the dots:P LOl I also put them in my poem a lot. I have been told, they are distracting. I am not sure if they are needed as they draw the eye away from the beautifully words you wrote.
I loved this. My only question is is there a need to end a lot of you lines with the dots..I am not sure what they are called in the 'writer's world' but they seem unneeded. BTW, I use them a lot as well. I think it is because I naturally stop and pause when I write and think.... see! there they are:) I am not sure the reader needs to pause though.
I thought the poem was cheerful and uplifting and a enjoyable read!
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