I'm not going to say it was confusing, it was a short mystical story. It did grab attention and perhaps I would read this or something like this to my children. It was very positve, I hope for many more short stories.
Frankly, I was in a grumpy mood until I read this. Growing up is so hard to do even though when you don't know the weight of your jelly. (could it be gold?)
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