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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like the message of this piece, even though it isn't really realistic that someone wouldn't go to their mailbox for 50k just because of high winds, and then forget about it later that same day. However, it isn't the details that are really important, but the overall message about the importance of faith. Also, I liked how you had the blue text throughout most of it, and then changed to red for the end. That really drove home your message well I thought.

Thanks for reviewing my piece: I should have some more up soon, so check back some time. Peace out.
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