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Review of TOO COCKY BY HALF  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great hurmous story ~ well written but did find one typo error here it is:

The hole - I think you forgot the letter "W" as in
[The whole]
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Review of Dream Traveling  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
What a wonderfully written poem.
I enjoyed reading it very much!
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can relate to your memmories.

When I was around the age of 12 the neighborhood girls and I decide to make a Girls Only Club house.

We scavanged here, there and everywhere for boards, borrowered saws, hammers and nails from our father's tools. Our Girls Only clubhouse was built on my best friends property.

At that time we lived in a rural setting. As the years flew bye and we abandoned our clubhouse, it was converted to hold wood for the fireplace in her parents home.

Today 40 years later, the little rural area is all built up with commercial buildings. My friends parents house and our clubhous is still there surrounded by tall buildings. I am amazed that when I drive by to see it still standing!
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great poem!
It is amazing how tiring a person's eyes get
With irrating blinking, glittery, screaming page covers of blinding backgrounds and neon print.
No wonder we get twitching eyes balls!
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
The Path ~ well written but True love ~
When one's life partner is no more on earth, they are always there in spirit and memories.
So the path of life still walked perhaps in absent of a visual partner but those of us that have experienced true love, know they walk the path not alone.
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a lovely poetry-prose writing. Good work!
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I certainly can relate to Motherless Daughter's. Though my mother passed away when I was very young.
My father never remarried.

My only sibling a sister 5 years older. Seems we never connected for many years, age and lifestyle differences.

Now almost seniors we are making up for lost sisterhood. It feels so great!
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Review of Our Guest Book  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks a bunch for the wonderful Fuzzy Flowers gif. So helpful and a nifty idea too! Can't believe a year has rolled by since I first joined WC! Hugs sent for remembering!
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your c-notes are great and always admire good talent!
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought your title, was poetic by nature and captured an inquisitve response, from me the reviewer.

Your story held a variety of interesting set of plots, melding from one to the other, so smoothly. The last sentence summed up all the emotions in the story! It was a most enjoyable read.


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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello iva*mae ~ What a great little story of innocent days.
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very good and well written!
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Review of Ezra's Peace  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting short story.
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Thanks for your insight on being Asian in North America.

The highlighted phrase
"I speak-ah no Eng-grish" comes in very handy."

Well we all can relate to that one since all have come from another place even if it is only through ancestor background. Even the First Nation People (they won't admit that) but the history/geography books state they travelled to North America from Asia and Norway when the continent was connected to Europe.
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Isn't that true, then another day, a stab at the muddy canvas. Wella it all comes around to save instead of scrape!
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Review of Annie  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A great story lesson. We all should have knowledge of administrating CPR.
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Mourning a loved comes in stages, yes one stage is rage.

When my husband passed away, I put his remote control airplane down on the floor. It was a hobby of his. I was so mad at him, for leaving me. I jumped on it several times till it was demolished except for the little twin engines, which were not destroyable. After that I felt great for releasing my anger but soon a feeling of reget washed over me.
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Review of That Face  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem iva*mae!
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Review of Fabulous Angel  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
True friends, seem to sense bad times and are arrive, out of nowhere it seems. Nothing is netter than to have one or two dear friends.
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello catwoman - I just started "Invalid ItemOpen in new Window.
I would like to invite you to join. Hence it is brand new and a wee bit early to start a garden group but I think most northern gardeners, start planning for spring and being back in their gardens.

I have visit all of your writings and pics, would also like permission to put a link on the main page, to your portfolio as a featured gardener.

I garden from a deck now but have had many gardens over the years. My last garden I had two butterfly bushes, such sturdy shrubs with added bonus the attraction of butterflies!
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Always like a sotry with a happy ending!
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Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Great story, princevlad but a few spelling errors.
Maybe using the spell check [linked] the story, in your private porfolio, could help find the spelling erros.
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Review of The Mirror  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Barbe that was an interesting poem.

You had one typo erro I reconized.
I will bold it in red font

Her is th line with the error
For there I sw not my reflection,

Think you missed the letter a

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Review of Secret Identity  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Interesting story,suspenseful with a question at the end, who killed Mark? I guess that is your plot in the story, after many chapters.

One typo error I found: [forgetting too} read the sentence and you will find the error. Spell check would have missed the error. [too should be to]

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Review of Old Friends  Open in new Window.
Review by decora Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Nice poem and so true
A good friend seems to know
when to appear.
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