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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there,
I'm new to this site too but just wanted to give my feedback on your poem. I really like it as it made me think about its meaning - it makes me visualize a man whose village is swept away by flooding caused by torrential rain. He starts breaking down and losing his faith in his god. Perhaps the lullaby was suggesting he lost his own child in the waters. I would not personally change a thing about it, it has its own flow and rhythm. I hope you write more poems, I'd really like to read them.

Nyx


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