This story is an extremely intriguing tale and I thoroughly enjoyed having the choices to continue it. It was definitely unique in the story being about a kid that wants to know what it's like to actually be fat compared to being skinny. I found myself drawn to find out what was going to happen next. I think more chapters should be added and enjoyed the creativeness of the story.
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