Wow, this really was a great story. I loved it from beginning to end. It is true, life can change without a moments notice, sometimes for the better, sometimes for the worse. Excellent job.
This was a very interesting story. The way that you wrote it kept me on the edge of my seat. It was so mysterious and captavating that I couldn't wait to read what was really going on and the end was very good. Great story. Thanks for sharing.
This was amazing. I was so engrossed with this story from the very beginning. This is truly a life lesson. What sounds good at first, may not be the best thing for us in the end. Especailly when it's being promised to us by someone who is less than trust worthy. Lucky for Asma she realized this before it was too late. This story was very well written and the moral behind it was great. Excellent job.
This was very good. It was deep without going on a long over worded tirade. Nicely done. I would just go back and check over my capitalization. However, these mistakes do not take away from the message behind the poem. Good job.
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