This is simply wonderful imagery and storytelling.The attention to detail is exhilarating and quite uncontrived. Fantasy is not one of my favourite genre's but this type of story definitely has me hooked. Where is the rest of the story and is this part of a book up for publication? Thanks.
Hi there what a great piece of writing. I have sincerely rated this piece according to the effect that it has had on me, I shall be saving your piece to read again and again whenever I need inspiration. As far as I am concerned, its not about what you believe, but rather how you put into practise those beliefs. What you have written should be required reading for all who want to love - UNCONDITIONALLY - their fellow man. I have two pieces that may be of interest to you, please R&R if you have a mind to: they are #1428449 and #1428607. Thank you kindly.
Agonisingly truthful and finally encouraging. I've read some of your work and may I respectfully ask whether you have considered expanding these thoughts into prose. Please, this is not to say that this is not good poetry. I am suggesting that like Nikos Kazantzakis you could make the transition to poetic prose with ease.I have two items that might interest you: #1428607 and #1428610. Please R&R. Thank you.
Why am I getting a lump in my throat? Yes we complicate life too much and forget that we are on a journey the destination for which we need to prepare. Thank you. If you don't mind please see my item#1428449 and tell me what you think.
I love love stories and your well told effort had me focussed. The details and the easy flow carried me along happily to the satisfactory ending." A first love stays forever", are you trying to rattle our collective cages?
This concise and heartwrenching journey really struck a cord with me. Your encompassing of global conflicts helps us to understand that we have a personal responsibilty not to contribute to conflict. The vivid imagery and the rocking of your mind rocked me. I will read this again and again. Surely this can't be all there is?
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