I'm glad that for my first review, I can start with the positive points: this poem is the work of a talented writer. The structure is good and the verses are free of cliches, which comes from the descriptions being so specific. I love that the poem is a story in itself.
I'd advise you to continue writing poems that paint such detailed imagry.
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