A very beautiful poem. I like your use of layout, but I am still trying to find how it links to the poem... Maybe it doesn't.
Your language is relatively simple, but you use it in such a way that really leaves the reader happy, thinking, and to me that is a core essence of good writing.
This is going in my favourites for sure.
- Nick
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