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Rated: ASR | (1.5)
BORING

This reads like some metaphysical bible extract. Go praise Jesus you friggin hippie. Please for God's sake never write again. No really i'm beginning you. How could you ever assume that anyone would ever really want to publish that piece of tripe. Wheres the characterisation, plot, descriptive language. It reads like a souless lecture. And as for the whole sex thing, I'm a young published writer and yesterday I screwed some random girl. Life is great huh?
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