I'm not even going to use my regular rating scale for this story. The author make their point way to clear, I believe. This was a haunting, chilling, and disturbing story, yet there were no ghosts, demons, or witches-just one monster! I hope this is only a story!
Originality--4
Creativity--5
Entertaining--5
Storytelling--4
Overall--5
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Total Score--4.5
A very entertaining and enjoyable story. Writers imagination set at full steam. Unsure of what writer was talking about till end, thought maybe he was describing some sort of plant, don't know why. Keep upi the good work and I look forward to reading more!
Originality--5
Creativity--5
Entertaining--5
Storytelling--5
Overall--5
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Total Score--5
The way this story is written by the author it makes you wonder how real this story is. So much emotion! I'm almost afraid to say great job, just incase this story is more real then we want to believe. Very entertaining yet disturbing- perfect!
Originality- 4 Not completely orig but entertaining
Creativity- 5 Story is realistic
Style- 5 Great writing
Storytelling- 5 Did this really happen?
Overall- 5 Real life great story
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Total 5 Keep up the good work!
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