Haha! This poem is cute! I like the lighthearted style. I literally can't find a single error with anything here! I think you have the talent to become a great children's author, and I sincerely hope you will succeed in getting your work out into libraries and bookstores one day. Great job - keep on writing.
Great poem! I have thought the same things about life, but never found a way to put it into words. Beautifully written, it almost seems like you have opened a small window in your mind, sharing your deeper thoughts with the world. It is short, but sweet. It really makes you think about the significance of every passing moment. Here's a gift for you, and I hope to read more from you in the future.
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