Hello Blue_Pumpkin,
I must say your poem is really impressive.
You have made good use of the rhyming, which takes the poem to a whole new level.
Apart from that, the emotions and feelings are beautifully expressed which takes the reader on a ride full of nostalgia.
The poem is innocent, sweet and intense at the same time. Truly romantic! :) Well done.
Hi Sunita,
Well, you have written an amazing poem.
With just a few words, you have nailed it. The emotion is beautifully expressed in a short piece which very few people manage to accomplish.
It expresses love and longing in a dreamy way which sure is a treat for poetry lovers.
This line really touched my heart "Then I awoke, we fell apart, But forever you live inside my heart".
Looking forward for your other poems.
With Love,
Nabell.
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