its a very good story i love it i would love to read more and i hope i do read more of your storie and i think the came for your heart and maybe something that you when thur in your life but i hope that you keep up the good work and keep on writeing from your heart and mind
was ok im goin to break it down on how i ratein it over all 2 star how it was put togearther was a 2 star ut was a lil hard to keep in mind where you was goin and comin from use of words was 2.5 star if i was you i would read thur i t and see where i could make it a lil better now as far as you putin feelin in to it it was the so fellin you got a 4 star but it has a feelin of a peom and a short storie
mythicheart
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