I think this lyrics are really great! they really touch your heart and give you courage thye do work at those times when we are haveing a hard time of 'stage fright or something" it relly helps to rmeber the lines of the this
good job keep writiing!
Dani
Love this piece think that anyone would love it of any age group I could see even reading this to my young brother as a bed time story i never could have wretten so well from the view of a cat its as if you where one!
of coarse me being 15 i also enjoyed this read! i love the part at the start where joshua is naming the kittens and asks his mother if she is listening that is so classic how moms do that! just made me laugh so hard good job at finshing your nano novel!
Live long laugh hard!
have a happy new year!
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