I loved all of the environmental details, they really pulled me in and made me feel as if I were there. You did miss some commas and things. I'm really bad about that, too, but that's what editors are for right? I am about to read chapter one and am prepared to be as equally impressed. Please read from my portfolio, there is currently only one item, and return the favor by giving an honest review.
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