Mysticroz's (mysticroz) Reviews

Mysticroz

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9 Public Reviews Given

10 Total Reviews Given

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#2878253

Review of Hand Towels- *Drama Merit Badge Winner*

Review by Mysticroz

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A touching look into the sad truth of the lives of abused children. You made me feel her conflicting emotions, from the joy of finally being loved to fear, then anger and finally hatred. I think you did a good job telling a very complicated story from the beginning to the end.

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#2329356

Review of ANIMAL CRACKERS

Review by Mysticroz

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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First Impression :

What a cute, sweet little story. It reminds me of something one of my grandchildren would say. Way to go, Mom, working with your daughter to write a story.

Spelling and Grammar :

I didn't see any errors in this section. Good job!

Flow :

I enjoyed the flow of the story.

Additional Comments :

I can't wait to see what you write at the end of our class.
Oh, yeah, I liked the final draft best.

Keep Writing!

Writing is my guiding light!
Mysticroz

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#2307685

Review of The Eyebright's Dimension

for entry "Chapter One: Eunae"

Review by Mysticroz

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I read the prologue and this chapter. It makes me want to continue reading to see what happens to Eunae.
Not good for me since I should be writing, but very good for you. The storyline has held my attention, the dialog is well written and I can tell already that it is a page turner. I will continue reading it.

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#2298701

Review of I DON'T Share Chocolate!

Review by Mysticroz

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I thought this was totally hilarious. It made me smile on a day that I thought I could not possibly smile. To me, that is truly a winner. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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#2298692

Review of 7 AM

Review by Mysticroz

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I think your poem is very poignant and I liked the way you shared your feelings while leading us to the conclusion. I had a little bit of a problem with the flow, but I think it is a beautiful poem.

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#2293695

Review of A dream of a ride.

Review by Mysticroz

Rated: ASR

| (3.5)

Ok, I am very new at reviewing, but here goes. I could relate to the feel of the cool metal, the leather, etc. I think maybe you worked too hard to make it rhyme. I would love to read it as a whole piece, less/no stanzas and less worry about rhyming.
Relax and the let the words flow. There was a lot of real feeling flowing through the words, but that got chopped off with the two line stanzas and the rhyming seemed a little forced. I always have to fight those same things in my poems.

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#2292299

Review of Lupus -The Uninvited Guest

Review by Mysticroz

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Having Lupus myself, this poem definitely invoked deep emotions within me. I have had these feelings and fought with this predator also. I felt a kindred spirit. This is my also my first review.