Funny and interesting conversation with the doctor but I enjoyed reading about "when we become of a certain age". I understood you - I guess I'm your age and I felt (feel) the same way too. I feel younger every year I get older. Nice chapter. Myrna Scarsi.
This was my favorite chapter! I loved all these "stories" of places and people and pyramids and bullfights and Spain and Africa and Uruguay and blue grotto's. I am enjoying each and every chapter and want more. I loved to read about the first kiss. Keep writing, chrisdaltro!
Interesting point of view from a "man's" perpective. Never thought about it that way. What will happen next? I liked the words The Lovers Invisible Bridge. Myrna
A true, vivid, delightful rainbow of thoughts, visions, places, feelings, sensations, locations, people and of LIFE. And that mother, what a mother, huh? I hate cabbage too. I follow. I read. Go on. Myrna
Interesting and creative. Was it true? Could be. i enjoyed the read. A similar case happened to me once in Italy, with a candle too but it was with a catholic priest. Really great story. I loved the dialogue and the ending. You really did a good thing with 500 words. Myrna
I knew a person that could do this - read other peoples' minds, and she told me that she always thought it was a curse. She never had peace. he was always in other peoples' lives. This was a good story and very sad too. I will read your other stories, I identify with them so far. Myrna
I have a cat. A Siamese cat. They feel, they know, they can tell, even if you are angry, sad or upset. They know death and happiness. Your story was true and rea. Myrna
Your plot and characters are superb and the story, poignant. I loved the clthes description and their side conversation... so nice. She did remember, huh? It was all there, inside of her. I loved it, Chrisdaltro.
THis was my first short story read on writing.com and I was totally impressed with the power, beauty and honesty. It took me by surprise and I couldn't stop reading and I was sorry it... ended. Nice, great work! THe words and characters are stron and I liked the story of the family and their names and destiny.
Myrna
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