jack ,
sorry for the late reply . but reading about your black dog , i never think you are wasting your time here . Everyone has a black dog within them . At the beginning if it drags you , later one day it will get bored and will walk you .." woah !! what a powerful imagery . but i felt that your poem is a bit too prosaic . No offence but i prefer it to be more with a flow .. anyways thanks for sharing your gift !!
write on
myopensud
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