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Review of ALIEN ABDUCTION  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Cool story. Very possible it could be happening or could have happened. Good job keep the interest up. The story moved very well, with a strong thought to it. I would increase the size of the font, only a suggestion to make it more readable to mobiles. Good job with this, I enjoyed it. Thank you for the journey. Keep writing.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very descriptive story. I must admit it lost me a few lines in. Seems like someone was run off a bridge or something. Sometimes we should let the readers mind supply the description of something. Today we try to make our story's as 'show not tell'. It sounds like this could be a very good story with some editing. Lot of talent here. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. This was just one person's opinion.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Such a neat little story of a child bring items from visits she makes in her sleep. Don't we all wish we could do that sometimes. Good story, kept me interested. The last paragraph sums it all up. I would put the title on top of it. Gives it a more finished look. But other than that, good story. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice flash story of break dancing on the track beside a school game. No fights, no bad stuff, just full break dancing with music. Cool story. It was easy to read and I laughed as well. Good job with this flash. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. My only suggestion is to increase the font size for easier readability. Other than that, good story, shows talent.

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Review of Triangle Crush  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cute flash story, I believe, about the game of soccer. Every getting fired up and anxious for the game, ready to go at it. The game shut down because of a storm. It can be disappointing to the players. Good job with the emotion, understanding who is telling this is a mystery. Good story though. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of You Better Run  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cool flash fiction story. Held my interest and was easy to understand. Good job. I would suggest less white space. Only separate the dialogue with a blank line. The story premise and story itself are good. It could even be expanded. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed the journey. Keep writing.
I know limited word count makes it tough sometimes.

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Review of Listen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat poem. Read from top down or bottom up. Good job. The content was interesting. We should grasp the time we have and appreciate it. Good job with this being a palindrome. I enjoyed reading this. Only suggestion would be to increase the font size. But excellent little poem as it is. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of fEAR  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice little prose, reference to the scriptures. I enjoyed this reading. It gives you a bit to think about. We live, we die. Make the best of what is in between. This is a good outlook with a bit of hope mixed in. Hope showing where you say deeds with go with us. Thank you for sharing a powerful prose. Only suggestion would be to increase the font size. Just a suggestion. Good prose as it stands.

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Review of Meeting Aliens  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Neat little story of being abducted by aliens. This could be more than fiction, who knows anymore. I enjoyed this story, small confusion about the 4th paragraph. No big issues, just a word or two out of place, it seems. But good story, I suggest increasing font size. Only a suggestion. Good story. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Lie to Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I feel this is a King who is condemning those who lied to him. That if truth had been told, things would be different. Interesting poem, does cause you to think, should you always tell the truth? I suppose there are times fear prevents the truth from being told. Good strong free verse poem. Only suggestion I have is center it and increase font size. Poem is wonderful as it is.
Thank you. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
That is some list!! You have more horror books listed than my library has! Not to mention all the movies. Excellent collection. Good job. I read every title but probably only remember a few. My wife loved those horror movies. Good job.


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Review of Fragility  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel someone caught in something that seems hopeless, no matter how vile it seems. Repeat of the 3rd stanza shows being stuck in the web is key to issues. I enjoyed reading this and trying to think it through. Good job with conveying the emotion of fear and the resolution to accept the web. Just my thoughts. I suggest centering it and increasing font size. It's a powerful poem. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of To Begin  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this prose. A baby is about to wreak havoc on mom and dad by learning to crawl. Now begins their workout time chasing this baby. I love each stanza of the child sizing things up and getting prepared for the big crawl. Interesting prose, crawling from a child's viewpoint. Good job, I enjoyed reading this. Only suggestion increase the font size and maybe center it. Just a suggestion, it's good as it stands. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat little poll on your favorite Sonic character. I can see this as useful for a fanfiction writer to write about their favorite characters. As well as info for setting up an interactive story. Good insight to prepare this way. Smart move. No suggestions on the poll, of course, not much you can change. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice little poem. I had to look up the Eld Vintic poetry to understand. I feel this could be about writers block. And seeking inspiration to overcome it. I would suggest larger font and center it. Just to be visually pleasing. The poem itself is wonderful after discerning what the reader should feel. Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing.

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Review of You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel a love poem here. A very good free verse poem with a good flow. It's all about 'you'. Beautiful picture painted with those words. Good job. The only suggestion is to increase the font size and center the whole poem. Just a suggestion, this is a good poem as it stands. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Edgar Allan Poe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this poem. About the Master of Horror. Good job with the rhyming scheme. Easy to read and follow, does cause us to think in Poe's terms. Good job. The only suggestion is to increase the font size and maybe center it. The poem is good as it stands. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Sunny Girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Such makes the world go round. Poems to school crush. Been there but was never much of a poet back then. Good job with this. I could see you melting when comparing her to the brightness of the sun. Good poem. I suggest centering it and increasing the size of the font. Just a suggestion, other than that this is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading this and the picture it conjured up. Thank you. Keep writing.

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Review of Stop the Parade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful, cute poem of someone saving a child and mother. Someone is a town drunk. Interesting, making a hero of a specific town drunk. I enjoyed this poem, causing me to think a little deeper than what is being said. Good job. Thank you. Only suggestion would be to increase the font size, other than that, this is a good poem. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem about a wonderful grandmother: just her past actions will cause us to think. Often, we get tied up in our own worlds, and we forget loved ones. Good poem. Caused me to remember my own grandmother and her crocheting. Loved the emotion this brings out. Good job. Only suggestion is increase the font size, only a suggestion. Great little poem as it stands. Thank you for sharing.
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Review of Cruel Perfection  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good rhyming poem. The striving for perfection feeds stress. Knowing that perfection is unattainable does not change the striving for perfection. Good job bringing this all the way around. You could say it is perfect in its imperfection. I enjoyed this journey. Thank you for encouraging the reader to think about things. Only suggestion is increase the font size. For readability. Other wise its a very good standing poem. Keep writing.

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Review of Bracelet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat little free verse about keeping or discarding an item full of 'bits of memory'. I can see that. Cleaning attics, or basements, and finding items. Most are kept, the memories sometimes fully remembered, sometimes not. Good poem. I would center it and increase the font size. Just a suggestion. The poem is good as it stands. Thank you for the journey. Keep writing.

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Review of No Sudden Moves  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice little essay on the cat. Seeing through a cat's eye can be fun. Wondering what is really going on in their head is a good hobby. I enjoyed this story, and I have seen this many times in slightly different circumstances, with my grandkids and my cats. Good job. Good talent showing here. I suggest a larger font, just for readability. Good story as it stands. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem, of what love is. I remember several years ago 'Love is' was used many times. Very descriptive and holds the readers attention well. I would suggest increasing the size of the font. The poem is good as it is, very entertaining. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this story. All dialog. It was done very well. Hooked me and pulled me all the way to the end. Good job. I saw no real problems, grammar or otherwise. The only thing I would suggest is to increase the size of the font. Just a suggestion, the story is very good and the dialogue is handled very well. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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