Writing poetry is a wonderful thing that can ryhme and sometimes just flow. With the three wishes in your poem it seemed that it may of went into several wishes try to stay focused on the topic of three wishes. Other than that I thought that the poem was very well written with your ryhming scheme.
I believe in a essay like this you could add maybe examples of statements that people do or say to believe in god. Instead, of arguing that there is no specific proof. If you think about it everything is a question, how we get fingerprints who is to say that the powder or dust doesn't interfere with the print. The fact that the lasts longer in one area that another or could we just think that it is longer.
Most of us know that we are going through things and never take the satisfaction of expressing each an every detailed feeling . I learned that we create poetry by giving the knowledge of how we can feel . i love that . Because every feeling is like a picture.
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