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7 Public Reviews Given
9 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I love to review other writers' work. When I review, I mention any errors that I have found in the writing. I also like to tell how it personally made me feel or react to the work as I read it. I also include my thoughts while reading and how I like/dislike the ending.
I'm good at...
drawing, painting, and possibly even writing short stories.
Favorite Genres
Horror, Suspense, Paranormal, and I also like to review stuff relating to Greek Mythology.
Favorite Item Types
I love to review poems and short stories.
Public Reviews
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Review of growing pains  Open in new Window.
Review by Skye Monroe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello (:

I have recently gotten your Review Request for your work "Growing Pains".

Grammar: There were NO Grammar mistakes at all that I saw. Altogether, I love your wording and how you use details to describe different people and places.

My Personal Experience: When I began reading this, I felt bad for Joe because of his mother's death. Although it was sad, something made me want to continue reading and that's just what I did! I read until I reached the very ending and I felt as if I was living Joe's life because of how you explained different events that occurred in his life!

My Thoughts: I believe you have a very long and wonderful future for you in writing. I believe that you could possibly even take Joe's life and even write a book. I also feel as if you could write about anyone's life and make it interesting. You have a true talent for writing and I hope you continue writing!

Did I Like/Dislike The Ending?: Well, I actually loved the ending. I was getting angry at Maxine myself because of how she "changes her personality" basically every time her and Joe met. I also felt as if she was using Joe, kind of like how his neighbor used him for the oil to set the snake on fire. Maybe Joe deserved someone better anyway!

I hope I can review more of your items and maybe even see Joe again?


I hope your have a wonderful day and KEEP WRITING*Heart*

Write On!

- Skye~
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Review of The Sirens.  Open in new Window.
Review by Skye Monroe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

Nice to meet you! How are you? (:

I am reviewing your work "The Sirens.".

I really like this poem! I am really into Greek Mythology and the Greek Gods so this actually sparks an interest in me!


I think you are very good at capturing the sirens' real intentions rather than what they tell or sing to the poor sailors.


Since this is relating to Greek Mythology, I wonder if you have any interest in it also or maybe enjoy writing about it?

If you do anymore work relating to Greek Mythology, please let me know!

Altogether, you did a fantastic job with this poem!


Thanks & Write On!

- Patricia
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Review of Sugar Memories  Open in new Window.
Review by Skye Monroe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! I really enjoyed reading that! I really love the theme of this poem and I also love your word choices. (: Fantastic Job! Keep up the good work!
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