This is a very enlightening story even if you do write with an accent. : ) There are very few mistakes when it comes to wording; you should be proud of this piece.
And i can certainly relate to the premonitions. I too have deep seaded feelings and warnings when it comes to danger. I've always felt i have angels watching and protecting me.
Great Job! Keep it up. Any pointers on how to correct the little mis-wordings, i would be more than happy to help in any way.
As for my ealier email? Well, i can assume you are from NYC? From Spain perhaps?
Me? Born and bread Texan. lol
Take Care,
Pen
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