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Review by Magnesiumoid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
To tell ya the truth, I hated all of those as a kid! Why not make Fat Albert a choice? That show still kicks ass!
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Review by Magnesiumoid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
YES, you should continue! That was 3, 2 sentence paragraphs long so you should figure it needs alot more. Next time you make something that short make sure the plot moves quickly.
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Review by Magnesiumoid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Yes yes, I'm very sure that we will all die! Thanx especially to George Dubya Bush! But not because of global warmings because Bush is gonna cause Nuclear Winter anyway. But cuz he's turning the US into a 1750s Texas!

That should be an option!

-Magnesiumoid
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Review by Magnesiumoid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lol! It ended like this!

"Titzi wrinkled her Face and removed her Balls from her Bra. 'I will.' She said.

And she did.

Jane still wanders the woods as a Fart and Tooty is left doing all the chores on her own now."


THAT WAS SOOOOO !@#$ING FUNNY!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Migration  Open in new Window.
Review by Magnesiumoid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I must honestly say, if the story were extended, divided into chapters, and accompanied by a few cheap artworks that have a little bit to do with part of the book, then it would easily become an award winning novel. One suggestion, why not make some exciting/eyecatching parts throughout the story to keep the average reader focused. Naturally, having ADHD, it was a bit hard to stay in tact top to bottom. Other than that, GREAT JOB!
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