A great telling of the story of Christ's crucifiction from another perspective. The twist at the end drives home the point of the story, but still leaves room for hope. I enjoyed it greatly.
Good work and please continue to write, good stories are hard to find!
The story of the former priest and his search for his father's rosary, is a reminder that there is more to life than the material things of life, and that faith is more than just the outward observances of our own particular religion.
A very interesting story with an ending that leaves the reader with a few questions, one that makes the reader think about what was written (and in my case to re-read it.
I find it hard to fault this story on the technical aspects of grammar, puctuation or spelling, and yet I want to.
Basically, a disturbing, yet well-written piece of fiction.
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