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Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
This was a fantastic "Choose Your Path!" sort of thing. Especially the Lucy arc. But for some reason, it became diluted with additions by people that had some perverse need to fantasize about a TODDLER getting fatter. This was a fantastic read with plenty for everyone, but has now become a "Let's Get Off On the Family Baby Gaining Weight!" fare.

I won't be checking this for updates anymore. Because every time I do, it's only additions to Mary's arc. Some of you people (you know who you are) are sick and need help.

I'm done.
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