This is obvioulsy a heart-felt expression of your deep love for Mary and your dismay over those who under-value her or outright dishonor her. There are some typos and grammatical errors so I have to take some points away for that. But your deep honesty and the gentleness expressed with your pleading are respecful and balanced. Of course, authentic Protestant Christianity doesn't dishonor or make fun of the Virgin Mother but feel that the Catholic Church honors her too much to the point that they think we make an idol of her. Patient, respectful exposition of the true Catholic faith - which you have begun in your short piece - is no doubt the best way to open their eyes to the truth. Keep up the good work!!!
While I strongly disagree with your conclusion, I am in this review only going to comment on your writing, and not your argument. You did a lot of homework and did a great job showing forth your point-of-view. You raised some serious issues and presented your position in a very compelling and persuasive way.
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