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Review by disingenuous Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good premise, at least for my tastes, and no paths that stray too far from the point. The path for Percy is especially good, but competition between Jason and Percy is nice, and the Nico path has been recently developing in good ways. Maybe I'm biased because I'm a contributor, but I really like this story.
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Review by disingenuous Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice! Playful banter with heart between the couple like in the novels, interspersed with that good kink. The feeding and conversation mixed together both lead into the kiss a the end well, always a good wrapup for intimacy. One of the best-written chapters in this interactive.
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