An intriguing story, well rounded by getting the story to pass on.....A little more character detail or a bit of conversation would make it even more memorable.
Dear Timothy,
Thank you for sharing your process of reviewing items on this site.
Your explanations are very helpful and confirm largely what I have been thinking. But I feel validated now and will attempt to apply your suggestions.
This is the second story I read today and both treated the sense of alienation people can feel and offered a way to overcome it. I like the way this story is kind of generalised (the woman, a child, a ship on the horizon). It is well structured and the beginning loops into the end phase.
Dear Bubblegum Jones,
Thank you for sharing the account of your experiences on Writing.com and thank you for reviewing my work twice and both very positively!
You are a better record keeper. I am more intuitive in my explorations and do not keep a tally...yet.
I hope you will stay on this site and enjoy more creative writing from around the globe.
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.25 seconds at 11:32am on Sep 24, 2024 via server web1.