I got a kick out of the ending of this! I had absolutely no idea what was really going on until almost the very end. This was a lot of fun to read, and a very clever twist at the end. I was actually a little confused at first at the first mention of street names, but I quickly caught on. Then I went back and read it all with the ending in mind. Great work!
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