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Review of October 31st  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (2.0)
Frist, you say my parents then used the name Martain so are you telling the story from the grave and if so how? Next you have so major run-on sentences. Lastly if you suffocate with a bag over your head wouldn't people know how you died?
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Review of Glimmer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I don't understand the time jump from 3 months ago til one month later. I am really eager to see where you take this though.
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Review of cannibals shoes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed the story but I guess the question is what do new shoes really have to do with anything.
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Review of what am I doing?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Your writing isn't that bad, and your spelling is great. So you know there are others out here who are bipolar and probably would take comfort in knowing others are going through the same thing. So keep writing, I am.
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