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Review of 1 Easy Prey  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great story, very well written, I enjoyed reading this!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this, very well written. Thank you for sharing and writing this, made my day.
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Review of What If  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this very much. Very emotional, but very well thought out and very well written.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great short story, well written, and the ending is nice.
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Review of Space Haven  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
First off, not to sound picky, but I noticed a grammatical error, "They didn’t go a home a different way this time" (the a should not be there), the error is very small, but I just thought I would mention it.

Second, this story is probably the best story I have read on Writing.com so far, I mean that. It is sad in some parts, but that makes it all the more realistic, and very, very heartwarming, a great feel good story for the whole family! You should definitely look into publishing this. Excellent job! A+
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This story is very beautiful, I enjoyed it so much. Great job.
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Review of The Squirrel  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this story! Great job!
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Review of The Clock Tower  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this story. Great job, but it is missing something at the end. Perhaps you could do a second part, but up to you. It might be more fun though if you have the boy actually turn into a demon at the end (and his family as well if they did attempt to save him), but again, up to you, your story. I still enjoyed reading it though. Kudos!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this mystery! Wonderful story!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so beautiful and it delivers a wonderful moral. So well written.
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Review of Gestorben  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved this, great job!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I loved this!!! So creepy and so good!
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Review of Invidia  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem so much, so well thought out and so true. Five stars and best wishes!
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