Ha! Once again, perfection! That's some really nice work. This is definately my kind of story. It sounds like something I would write but I think you're more descriptive. Excellent job!
Oh my goodness! That was amazing! I'm so pissed that that asshole Sigrum gets to kill Gabrielle! But as pissed as I am that was wonderfully written! I don't think I can find a flaw (other than the fact that a cool character gets killed by a dickhead!). I gotta make sure I read the rest!!!
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